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Suspenseful epic! By Tim Dec 26, 2004 20:48:46 GMT -5

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Post by Matthew on Dec 26, 2004 20:48:46 GMT -5

Is that it? I need an ending. Give me and ending. ENDING! DAMN IT! But really... you have a few grammar mistakes, a few discriptive mistakes, and one hell of a good read. It needs to become a full mystery. Put ten more chapters on it. From what I can tell so far, it's looking good.

I want candy, bum bum bum bum bum, I want candy...

Tim Global Moderator "I'm a nice guy, seriously" Posts: 557	Suspenseful epic! By Tim Jan 14, 2005 9:50:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tim on Jan 14, 2005 9:50:43 GMT -5 you know... I've never written an ending in my life... not one. I was contemplating making this into a screenplay (We'll talk later on this, I think.)
	-Tim Harvey, Global Mod, AU-MNP Comedic Entertainment

Matthew The Architect "I, however, am not nice." Posts: 257	Suspenseful epic! By Tim Jan 21, 2005 4:43:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Matthew on Jan 21, 2005 4:43:13 GMT -5 Yeah - Later we shall
	I want candy, bum bum bum bum bum, I want candy...

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